Hi Caroline, this is a great story, really well told. Lots of details throughout to add authenticity, great dialog, and very atmospheric descriptions of the different settings, from the pubs to the dunes of Tramore. And Seán's relationship with his mother is devastating. Congratulations!
Hi Caroline, this is a great story, really well told. Lots of details throughout to add authenticity, great dialog, and very atmospheric descriptions of the different settings, from the pubs to the dunes of Tramore. And Seán's relationship with his mother is devastating. Congratulations!
Thanks so much, Brian. x
Brilliant!
great story. very authentic. good, informal dialogue. I enjoyed it
Thank you, Nollaig. x