Deep thanks to those who’ve read the story, and especially those who took the trouble to “like” it or leave a comment. I wrote the first draft in 2018, when there was a “small” war in the Donbas region, and, partly because of my interest in politics, set the story in Odessa. Later drafts moved to the Baltics, still reflecting geo-politics (I think it’s a justifiable interest) but as I developed as a writer – I recommend wholeheartedly joining a writing group – I circled around the original inspiration. A kiss. Then worked out from there, giving due respect to the main characters. I’m grateful to Frazzled Lit for publishing the story and allowing readers to apply their own alchemical touches!
This story is so powerful, Kevin. I've been thinking about it a lot since I read it yesterday. The start feels almost otherwordly, with the empty mall and blasted-out cafe. Haunting
Deep thanks to those who’ve read the story, and especially those who took the trouble to “like” it or leave a comment. I wrote the first draft in 2018, when there was a “small” war in the Donbas region, and, partly because of my interest in politics, set the story in Odessa. Later drafts moved to the Baltics, still reflecting geo-politics (I think it’s a justifiable interest) but as I developed as a writer – I recommend wholeheartedly joining a writing group – I circled around the original inspiration. A kiss. Then worked out from there, giving due respect to the main characters. I’m grateful to Frazzled Lit for publishing the story and allowing readers to apply their own alchemical touches!
Thank you, Kevin, for letting us know about the genesis of this story! We're very honoured to have among the pages of Frazzled Lit!
A story that is being played out now, with no chance of escape.
A timeless story of love, care and uncertain hope set in troubled times. Quite charming - kudos
This story is so powerful, Kevin. I've been thinking about it a lot since I read it yesterday. The start feels almost otherwordly, with the empty mall and blasted-out cafe. Haunting