The writing is excellent and I enjoyed reading it. I like what you did with the day count. Really works well. But I have to say I get the same reaction at the end as I did from reading the first place winner. I just think, “And…?” The story ended, but it doesn’t feel like a satisfying Ending. Know what I mean?
I am partially sighted in one eye, so this resonated with me.
The writing is excellent and I enjoyed reading it. I like what you did with the day count. Really works well. But I have to say I get the same reaction at the end as I did from reading the first place winner. I just think, “And…?” The story ended, but it doesn’t feel like a satisfying Ending. Know what I mean?
Withdraw my remarks! Got a nice explanation of how to approach these stories that may seem to lack conventional “resolution.”